To read the short story about the origin of the poem you may go to: Tunnel Spirit Crossings – A Chinese Tunnel poem – Donner Summit, Truckee, California
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Very atmospheric, I can feel those crouching spirits.
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Thank you for your feedback Andrea. I am so glad to hear the feeling comes through. I think I like writing poetry now. The idea comes as a surprise… thank you also for reading and commenting here often!
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Beautiful & soul-stirring. Your image and words poignantly capture the feelings of that moment.
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Thank you! I read it to my kids without preamble (tho they knew it was about the Chinese Tunnels). When I asked them what they thought about it, they said,”Spirits of the dead Chinese people” and “Sounds like demons in there.”
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Oh my!
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